Waata-We need a Makeover

This is the rubric that a girl in class marked.














We need a makeover for our courtyard,it is ugly. There are many reasons for this, one the ground on our courtyard is uneven. Reason two, no one ever comes and plays on our courtyard simply because it is way to small and the basketballs hoops that were up a long,long time ago. Please HELP.



Crowded conditions, usually occur when the fields are closed. When the fields are closed the breeze gets crowded with kids trying to play cards or, just walking past. It is also crowded on our biggest courtyard and it is hard to play games like touch or basketball,when lots of kids are pushing and shoving.


The ground on our courtyard is uneven. When you want to play a little game of touch on our courtyard it is hard, because the ground is uneven and there is hardly any space that we can play on. It would be a waste of space if we just left our courtyard the way it is.



Also, the courtyard is very ugly. We need to entice some builders, to come in and make us some smooth concrete. Me and my partner Crusader want some picnic tables that could be installed where the grass is.

We need a makeover for our courtyard,it is ugly. There are many reasons for this, one the ground on our courtyard is uneven. Reason two, no one ever comes and plays on our courtyard simply because it is way to small and the basketballs hoops that were up a long,long time ago. Please HELP.

I think that we should remake our courtyard. CAN YOU HELP PLEASE!!!!!