First we are going to get 3 newspapers and roll them up into tubes, we will cut holes in them. We will use cello tape to tape the tubes to the table. We are going to have 3 holes in our tube. We have 10 pieces of newspaper,one meter of cello tape and obviously a marble.
I thought our plan that Kingston and crusader was terrible compared to my plan, where it would start off going to the side then going down and going to the left which would of been good. First we got 3 newspapers and rolled them up. The marble track was nearly finished, but it all fell apart right at the end. I think we should have gone with my idea.
Waata, I would like you to read over your writing before you publish it. There are some really basic mistakes that I know you could avoid with a bit more time. Take a look at:
ReplyDelete1. capitals for proper nouns
2. variety of sentence starters
3. limit repetition
4. sentences making sense and not missing words
Take you time Waata, you are a very capable writer when you put your mind to it.