Thursday, June 6, 2013

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Some people say that when it rains it means that god is crying. But I don’t really believe that god cries. Today the sky was dark, lightning bolts  filled the sky.  Terrible booms of thunder made me run to cover. Rain was splashing into my face it was hard to see then it happened I saw the love of my life. Unfortunately I fell over into a puddle and she laughed at me.

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