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“Look Rocks” shouted Raenan.  WOOOW rocks in a circle this must mean something thought Raenan. They walked up cautiously to check what was in the circle was this their way home? Unfortunately all that was on the circle was a arrow pointing to the west. It was obviously a sign to head that way, so off they went.

Topic Sentence Diabetes

Diabetes is a disorder which can be caused by many ways. You can get type 1 diabetes at birth. It can also come out of the blue when you are at young age. Type 2 is a genetic disorder which can be passed down from your family. Another way people get diabetes is from eating too much Junk food and just simply been unhealthy.

Carbohydrates : The food that we eat goes down into our stomachs and it gets broken down into carbohydrates, protein & fat. When your food digests your carbohydrates get broken down into glucose which goes from your stomach and travels through your bloodstream. It gets absorbed into your muscles and fat cells that becomes energy.

Your insulin acts like a key to unlock your muscle and fat cells so your sugar can crate energy for you. Without insulin your sugar can not get into your muscles and fat cells and you won’t have enough energy for the day this means you will feel tired and flattered. Diabetes can cause lack of insulin which means your muscle and fat cells cannot absorb the glucose (sugars) causing lack of energy.

Diabetes Is something you don’t want to have. Sometimes you just get it and other times you make yourself get by being unhealthy and making your body suffer. Having diabetes is bad for you because you will have to watch your sugar levels as you could die from a heart failure or something like that. If you get diabetes type one it just comes to you out of the blue but if you get type 3 then you need to exercise cut down on the junk food that you eat.

I Wonder Investigations

Will.I.Am

He was Poor.

His dad left his mum

East L.A

Music and arts saved his life

Science is important

Gave us $100,000.00

WOWWW Will.I.Am is coming to Pt England School. Will.I.Am is at MY SCHOOL a international star is at my school. Today is a dream come true. Mr Burt has keeped this a secret until ten minutes before Will.I.Am got to our school so it was a big surprise for our school.

 I’m in the senior Kapa Haka group and we were going to perform live in front of Will.I.am. My nerves were starting to get the better of me. My mind was exploding with thoughts of me messing the actions up and the embarrassment that would follow. We were waiting in the music room for him to arrive.

I could hear the kids all cheering so I could tell that Will.I.Am was here. It was our time to go on the stage. As soon as I saw Will.I.Am I got really nervous. First we started to sing a Maori song then we did a fierce Haka. Right at the end of the haka was my only mistake but the rest was excellent. Then we walked off the stage.

Will.I.Am stood up and started to talk about his life, he lived with his mum,brothers and sisters. His dad left his mum so she raised them by herself with no job so they were really poor. He lived in a ghetto which was in East L.A. Will.I.Am said “ I was going to end up in jail but music,arts and friends litteraly saved my life” Choosing your friends was the main message from him.

 

My Holidays

On Thursday me and my family went to a little town called Kaeo. We are going there because my mums Cousins son died in 2005, it is his unveiling for his grave stone.

Kaeo is about a 3 and a half hours north of Auckland we drove there in my dads van. We packed the van with all of our clothes food and with blankets, pillows. WE also brought my dads fishing rods because me and him wanted to go fishing. The drive was very very boring, we stopped in Whangerei for some fish and chips then we got back in the van for a one hour drive to reach Kaeo.

When we got there we unpacked all our gear. Then we saw a cat and her kittens, they were smaller then my hand. As soon as we got into the homestead, I jumped straight on the couch. I was so hungry. I made me a nice mayonnaise ham sandwich.

The next day we went to my mums Cousins sons unveiling of his grave stone. When we got there we had to wait for five minutes, until we were allowed to come on the burial grounds. When we walked up the hill to the grave we all gathered around it, some people were crying including my mum. The heat was burning me I so badly wanted to go to the beach but my dad said “NO”.

This picture is the Rugby club.